Adjustments made to "Passthrough" drawing

I have made the adjustments needed. Compare it with the pictures in the previous post and compare them. The shadows definately have improve things.

The "Bangor Feedmill" is done but not finished. I posted it to the Critique forum at "Wet Canvas" and received valuable advice on cropping to make a better picture.

In the computer I trimmed at recommended, broke up the foreground shadow and added the tree on the right. Now I have to do it sometime.